Thursday, February 16, 2012

My "Embelish an Ad"

“MIDVALE- clean, quiet, affordable Legacy Court. Free heat, water, and cable television. One bedroom and one bathroom for sale. NO PETS! Starting at $585 a month.” James wrote. He had a plan; a very devious plan.

    James Hall was a 18 year old kid that was struggling in school. He was held back a couple of years and cannot get passed the tenth grade. He usually skips school. He is a very smart kid. He knows spelling and math just from his earlier years in school but he doesn’t show any effort to learn now a days. His parents passed away three years ago. James can legally live by himself so he moves all over the place, switching houses every six months or so.
    James is a very troubled kid. His look doesn’t help being otherwise. He dresses in black sweats and a grey hoodie everyday. He has holes in his shoes and clothes, and he doesn’t bother getting new ones. James lost his parents when he was 15. They died in the most horrible way thought possible. They were slashed together in their own house. James remembers waking up from the sounds of screams and he went downstairs to find both of his parents dead on the bloody floor. Some people say James killed them. Why would anyone think that James would kill his own parents that he had loved so much?
    Now a days, James just walks around town and he always gets in trouble because his temper cannot put up with the teenagers that pick on him. He doesn’t have any friends even though he moves every so often. All he does is make enemy's with every other guy in high school. Sometimes girls too. The police hasn’t pieced this together yet buy every guy who ever picked on James is now dead or out of the country. All slaughtered like his parents were.    
    James realizes that the cops with think hes suspicious with all this slaughtering being done. But James will not get caught. He refuses to stop killing innocent people but he cannot get caught. This is why he moves so much, so that the police wont catch on. But just to be safe, he needs a partner. James pushed send on the ad email. He sent it to the jail newspaper. He knew that those getting released from jail will need a place to stay. Then he will convince the room owner to work with him and kill those lives of which they think deserve it.

~~~Years later~~~

    James found his new partner in crime, Charles. They became good friends and even better killers. They decided to start using other killing methods such as hanging, burning and other cruel schemes. They make sure that the police know it was murder, but make even more sure that they do not find out who the killers are. They have become very wealthy as paid assassins. They are criminal master minds so don’t cross their path or they will kill you.

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